Interesting. Your composition skills are quite good, I felt everything had a really nice flow to it. Its sort of aerie and creepy at the beginning and has a cool ambient sound. Production could be better, but it isn't too bad at all! My first track certainly didn't sound this good. I think the cymbals are a bit too loud though and they could benefit from some compression.
But overall, Good work! Nice use of real instruments too! You don't see that very often with virtual instruments nowadays.
However, I think you may benefit from trying a different DAW. Audacity is good for free, but you have so much more power in a full featured DAW. I use Reaper DAW, They have a great free trial. Check it out.